Compare your draft to your revision. Have you added relevant details or removed irrelevant ones? Have you changed the order of details or paragraphs?
Touchstone 3: Informative Essay Revision Consider revisiting the Unit 3 tutorial The Purpose of Revising. You might find it helpful to use the revising strategies to manage your time, to catch mistakes by reading aloud, to revise by asking questions about your own writing, and to make final revisions by printing out your paper and … Read more